Peer Review

Observer: Megan C. Jones https://www.megancjones.com
Website: Yesika Hermawan https://www.yesikahermawan.com


  • ·      The background too light, maybe put a little photograph as a homepage, a photograph of the garments or maybe just a white background so it will look cleaner since the cleaner the better.
  • ·      Don’t need 2 different navigation bar, maybe get rid of the side navigation bar and keep the top becasue the top navigation bar is easier to look at.
  • ·      Collection look nice and chromatic.
  • ·      Find some way to go back to collection (expect to have an X button) or a back button to get back to the homepage after opening a specific collection or textile. 
  • ·      Make all of them clickable, so can see it bigger because some of the picture can’t be clicked especially in the catalog page.
  • ·      Make the catalog page to be the same format so it will easy to navigate . 
  • ·      Make the title bigger or condensed it to one title instead of “collection” “textile” or “catalogs” by itself.

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